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A Hell of a Ride
Contributed by
doug
on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 07:42:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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HA HA HA!!!! ... Hey.. seriously... do you think I could have another go?......
yeah I know
say
and you
your a nut
and says boy
God shakes his head
and as your lookin down
^
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smashes your grill on his steel like a cookie
rookie in a mack truck boogie and he
to the path and the wrath of a part time
and so on and so on the day that you strayed
but hey you listen to nothin' and no one
to be taken to straighten your devious ways
and anger coursin' forcin' resolutions
through times of danger with strangers
but you went wild and ran like tarzan
to decide whats right for you child
for what its worth they tried
wined , dined , and refined
through canals of birth
Cast into Earth
^
Copyright ©
doug
... [
2006-09-10 19:42:48]
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Re: A Hell of a Ride
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 02:01:54 AM AEST
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You did an amazing job.
So different then any other writes.
Very freshing |
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Re: A Hell of a Ride
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 04:03:53 AM AEST
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| You are so clever does it take long to write? It would take me forever lol. xxx |
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Re: A Hell of a Ride
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by True on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 12:13:51 PM AEST
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| I like it, it seems like it would take longer to write like that because you have to write from the bottom up. |
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Re: A Hell of a Ride
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by heatherslostdreams on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 10:00:17 PM AEST
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this is really good i like they way you made it interesting from reading from the bottom check out some of my poems if you have time thanks
heather |
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