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My Forever- Blackened Sky
Contributed by
shinji_kusa
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Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 02:02:39 PM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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Apparently,
Im a rarity,
A sight so undefined,
Trembling with fear,
As I hide in the rear,
Playing with dark emotions,
And toying in devilish devotions,
A stage I entered so long ago,
Claimed by few and survived by most,
I got stuck,
Just my luck,
In a world thats larger than space,
Its my mind,
And its withered with time,
Molded like clay,
To create the world today,
As I see it in my eye,
My forever- blackened sky.
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shinji_kusa
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2006-09-11 14:02:39]
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Re: My Forever- Blackened Sky
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by Alison on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 02:33:59 PM AEST
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| short and to the point. i like it! very moving. great write |
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Re: My Forever- Blackened Sky
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by secretwind on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 06:43:46 PM AEST
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"As I hide in fear."
I dig that line in this flow..... |
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