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Blue Water
Contributed by
honey56
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Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 08:30:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Into the stream of blue
Water run
Down the creek
Around the bend
And back again
While the squirrels
Washes their nuts
Quench their thirst
From the cool waters
That flow...
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honey56
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2006-09-11 20:30:41]
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Re: Blue Water
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by doug on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 10:27:22 PM AEST
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A pleasant little glimpse
into the natural world.
I often watch the squirrels
and birds in my backyard
and find it peaceful.
Good Job , Truly , Doug |
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Re: Blue Water
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 02:10:53 AM AEST
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I agree with Doug there
I enjoyed this alot |
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Re: Blue Water
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by Ravensfire on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 02:53:24 PM AEST
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| I too, helps you to see in your mind the entire scene. |
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Re: Blue Water
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 03:12:13 PM AEST
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I would love to watch a squirrel
Wash his nuts lol I like your poem
and i mean it
excellent job very clever
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