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Love's Demise
Contributed by
xfrozenwindx
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Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 04:35:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Love's Demise
Again, the heat of life,
Is thrown forward by fire.
And the cold of ice, that is me,
Dissapears into the dreary window breeze.
I flush, I burn.
My face so steamed,
My skin screams and my pulse boils.
So I turn away.
And as always,
I find relief in the darkness of day.
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xfrozenwindx
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2006-09-12 16:35:40]
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Re: Love's Demise
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by ButchCorpuz on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 11:24:01 PM AEST
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Nice poem! Very beautiful.
I loved your last line:
I find relief in the darkness of day.
Keep writing!
-Butch Corpuz
-Betrayer of Hope |
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