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Into Death
Contributed by
lilbabe
on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 04:58:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I hate you
And this life
I'm through with disappointment,
Anger and strife
Self-inflicted pain
Just to satisfy
My tormented mind
And to bring the tears I cannot cry
You say you love me
But I know it's not true
I'm a big letdown
In everything I do
Kill me, please
Little boxcutter
Spare me future pain
Then I begin to stutter
"I'm so sorry
I had to leave
But I wasn't being selfish
It is that you must believe"
Last thought,
Last breath
Here I go
Into death
~~
Copyright ©
lilbabe
... [
2006-09-12 16:58:25]
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Re: Into Death
(User Rating: 1 )
by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 05:39:33 PM AEST
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I loved this...and this part was my favorite...
"Last thought,
Last breath
Here I go
Into death"
Kick ass... |
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Re: Into Death
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 06:36:51 PM AEST
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First of all, the flow and style are incredible.
The message is so emotional and sad your heart bled onto the page.
Second, I sure hope this is all poetic storming and this isnt how your really feeling, that would make me feel very sad.
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