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I, No One, Miss You
Contributed by
Exodus
on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 09:19:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I suppose
That no one even knows
How fast time goes
And where we are when it slows
I heard
The tweet of a bird
Sounds like a word
Not at first or second, but third
You should cry
If I was to die
All I do is lie
Only when I'm way up high
I'm a creep
Stuck and wading in way too deep
I used to only sleep
Like a feather, like everything was neat
Bewildered, maimed
Altogether blamed
Sick of that foolish game
Everything is still the same
You should win
I belong to my sin
I hope you smile at my grin
Covered up by the tendency to run to gin
Green and blue
Ocean true
I miss you
Like I always do
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Exodus
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2006-09-13 09:19:00]
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Re: I, No One, Miss You
(User Rating: 1 )
by Light_to_your_Darkness on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 11:27:41 AM AEST
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| Very deep, it made me sad but it was wonderful to be moved so. I love it |
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Re: I, No One, Miss You
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by BobbyZimmerman on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 06:06:24 PM AEST
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| Love the rhyme scheme...a very powerful message, articulated beautifully, great job. |
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