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The Boy You Fear
Contributed by
Jason_Robert_Britt
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Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
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I fell out of the womb And into this place I was given this shell And presented this face Introduced to the world And force fed it's ways Injected addictions And told not to play
Small hands reach for life You slap them away A pure heart seeks love You squish it all away Searching for acceptance You push me away Pussys aren't wanted so You beat in the pain
The boy you held above The boy you said you loved The boy that you beat blue The boy you thought you knew
And in your rejection Innocence fades Like the hungry rust On an un-used blade It eats throught the steel That the craftsman made So that all of his efforts Were sweat out in vain
Small hands reached for life But you slapped them away A pure heart sought love But you took it all away Searched for acceptance But you beat me away Faggets aren't wanted so I'm left here to decay
You wanted to teach me Wanted to love me Wanted to preach me Wanted to shove me Wanted to mold me Thought you could hold me From all that you told me Inside I'm folding Wanted to teach me Wanted to love me Wanted to preach me Wanted to shove me Wanted to mold me Thought you could hold me ***** you don't scold me Don't believe what you told me
The boy you held above The boy you said you loved The boy that you called queer The boy that you now fear
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2003-02-13 21:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Boy You Fear
(User Rating: 1 ) by karoody on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 11:19:49 PM AEST (User
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so sad...well written though |
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Re: The Boy You Fear
(User Rating: 1 ) by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 11:45:35 PM AEST (User
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This is soooo sad.... and as a bi, I know where it comes from... But the poem is so beautiful... Keep on coming to another day... in love all things are forgiven...
YS |
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Re: The Boy You Fear
(User Rating: 1 ) by viola on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 02:16:25 AM AEST (User
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this is very honest and thats fantastic. keep up the great words, good luck with starting your band, luv Viola. |
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Re: The Boy You Fear
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 04:09:47 AM AEST (User
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JRB, Now that's what I call real powerfull poetry. Rhymes, scans punches hard, memorable.
Try a couple of mine there is a similarity in style.
I'll work through the rest of yours.....seey ou |
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Re: The Boy You Fear
(User Rating: 1 ) by sunflower on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 02:45:23 PM AEST (User
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crying out your poetry,
real good |
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Re: The Boy You Fear
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spirit_Dancer on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 01:46:05 PM AEST (User
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Parents hold the blueprint of a mind in every word they say....it can map out a good future full of promise, or tear it down and destroy it. Kudos to you for writing this out and getting it on paper in the written word. You have to know there is NO God that would do that to a person, much less a child!
Love,
Spirit_Dancer...:) |
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Re: The Boy You Fear
(User Rating: 1 ) by tinka_belle on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 08:41:16 AM AEST (User
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"Faggets aren't wanted "
maybe thats true for some
but plz dont think the whole world feels this way
your words are so inspiring
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Re: The Boy You Fear
(User Rating: 1 ) by tinka_belle on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 01:22:59 AM AEST (User
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such amazing, mesmerising words
so honest
so touching
heart wrenching
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tear jerking
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Re: The Boy You Fear
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cancer on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 08:08:55 PM AEST (User
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i can't even begin to tell you how much i loved this. the flow is unbelievable. one of the most powerful pieces i've ever read. a masterpiece.
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