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Contributed by
Ravensfire
on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 04:04:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Sometimes I wonder why should I even try,
When she says I LOVE YOU suddenly her love dies.
It seems to me that WORD love is often used,
That it is often abused.
When I let down my guard and opened my heart,
In a matter of days it all falls apart.
When I looked in her eyes at a time that was near,
Those feelings I felt couldn't be more clear.
Now I look with a stolen glance,
Eyes that once sparkled no longer dance.
I saw broken dreams and felt broken hearts,
Feelings that are unknown I don't know where to start.
My love is a vengence thats NEVER free,
When I needed her soft touch it just couldn't be.
Copyright ©
Ravensfire
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2006-09-13 16:04:09]
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Re: LOST .
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by BobbyZimmerman on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 05:59:35 PM AEST
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| A poem which everyone can relate to. I liked the line similar to The Who's "Behind Blue Eyes", it was very well-placed there. Excellent write. |
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Re: LOST .
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 06:10:32 PM AEST
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| awwwwwwwwww so sad..I could feel the pain. |
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Re: LOST .
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by OceanZ on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 05:22:38 AM AEST
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it does speak for itself for the fact, i do have the same wonders sometimes... and i hate the way that makes me feel, but as if i'm forced to have the senses and the thoughts, i'm forced to live with it...
i like the poem, i truly do! |
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