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Waste
Contributed by
nirvana12
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Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 10:37:55 AM in AEST
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Time to start a new day, wake up to work my life away. Making a plan that will forever change my life. I need something to help with the pain. Kicking, screaming, birth and death. Never to know what is next. Time to end it I've said goodbye the best way that i knew how and in the end you'll find it was just a waste of time. Every day is the same in a distant way but it's over. Every minute I'm a step closer to death. Laughing, playing, wasted life. I couldn't seem to find the time. Haunting memories make their way across my mind. I never knew where to hide.
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Re: Waste
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by Light_to_your_Darkness on
Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 02:04:45 PM AEST
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| I'm sure so many ppl can find themselves in this poem...it's very good I like it :) |
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Re: Waste
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by ShaonKra on
Wednesday, 4th March 2009 @ 07:19:19 AM AEST
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It's good but I think you should seperate it into verses even though they may not be equal in size, it would be much easier to read and thus draw more comments from
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