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Alone, yet I stand surrounded
Contributed by
mystical_illusion
on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Well, i just wrote this in the heat of the momment.... so, bare with me lol. okay thanx
I suffocate as they surround me,
Strangers, whom call me their friend,
their daughter, their peer,
But i stand alone, myself to defend.
They think they understand so well
But really havent got a clue.
They dont know me,
and what i have to go through.
My days are dead,
With light filled full of darkness.
I walk hoplessly down this death row
Watching life pass by through this rotting carcass.
My distant eyes and my bruised,scarred, and bleeding canvas of skin
send out continuous S.O.S screams, and cries.
But no one chooses to notice,
Instead continue to believe my lame excuses and my mixed up lies.
Locked away from the world i live,
Within a self-constructed shell of anger and pain.
Treading in my unshed tears of melted happiness,
Getting sick and tired of this ritual game.
For now I proceed my journey alone,
Defending myself from those pretending to care.
When I finally fall to no return,
They'll all be sorry they were never really there.
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Re: Alone, yet I stand surrounded
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by karoody on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 01:49:33 AM AEST
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| i like this, lots of emotion shown here |
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Re: Alone, yet I stand surrounded
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by venkat on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 04:22:10 AM AEST
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| A great feeling in you anger..Your poem is very hot.. venkat |
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Re: Alone, yet I stand surrounded
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by maria_mendonez_ibardolas on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 06:35:50 AM AEST
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| True true,I like your poem.I have the same feeling like you do,your not alone in this kind of situation.I agree with all your words written on it.But never lose hope.God bless |
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Re: Alone, yet I stand surrounded
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 02:56:28 PM AEST
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I loved this very emotional you get your message across well. The pain u feel is very real to me as well. I enjoyed this keep on writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Alone, yet I stand surrounded
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:38:02 AM AEST
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| beautiful... |
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Re: Alone, yet I stand surrounded
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by adsalamon on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 05:20:26 PM AEST
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| very good :) |
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