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Blame Me
Contributed by
gabby521
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Friday, 15th September 2006 @ 04:56:00 PM in AEST
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So call me
Out on all the things that I've done wrong
Tell me
It's my fault 'cause I'm still holdin on
And keep me
Far from everything that once was mine
Talk to me
And let me know that I've got more than time
Time to think about how we got this far
Time enough to go over the reasons its over
I need more than time to figure out
How I really feel
When all that does is leave me knowin
That this was never real
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gabby521
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2006-09-15 16:56:00]
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Re: Blame Me
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by Evangeline92 on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 10:51:50 AM AEST
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| I really liked your poem.I can totally relate to that. |
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Re: Blame Me
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by twbanter on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 10:54:22 AM AEST
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Sometimes great conceptual ideas, are hard to translate into lyric. I see the melody behind this, and it's really good. I believe you WILL finish it, and it'll be great. I see the short words sung as overlap almost... Is that where you were going with that?
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