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Break Me
Contributed by
Karlee14
on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 03:28:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Just another mistake,
With every step I take,
Wondering how,
I got to allow.
Poisoning every breath,
With sweet temtational death,
I feel less and less,
When bitter thoughts confess.
Seep through my soul,
Blacken it like coal,
Make my eyes cold,
As secrets unfold.
Smash to the ground,
The sour profound,
Soak through my mind,
A life left behind.
Attack me,
Make me see,
Tear me down,
Force every sound,
Bring my tears,
Smash my mirrors,
Kill my dreams,
Silence my screams,
Break me.
Copyright ©
Karlee14
... [
2006-09-16 03:28:55]
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Re: Break Me
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by Lilbabe on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 12:35:19 PM AEST
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hmm...i like that. its hard use that rhyme scheme (at least for me. strong words.
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Re: Break Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 12:55:05 PM AEST
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i love it. absolutely amazing...but i just have a thing for dark poetry. beautiful, dark, deathly beautiful.
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Re: Break Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 09:32:38 PM AEST
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Hold on to your dreams thier not as far fetched as they seem
give yourself the chance at happiness and joy
and dont let some little things you
down
its poetry and expressing yourself is what its about and you did great at it
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