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We Live Together
Contributed by
Uncertain_Oblivion
on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 12:08:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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We live together, my enemy and I.
Living bitterly: condemned to die,
Like prisoners.
His gaunt face enlivened by
My living eyes-
Which watch in horror...
Where my skin crawls with disgust for him:
These living eyes which stare at my enemy.
His smile is wider than my own,
For he knows I live in torment and it gives him pleasure.
Smiling, he awaits beneath my flesh.
Crawling skin that I live in...
Take me from this place.
~Rhiannon
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2006-09-16 12:08:18]
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Re: We Live Together
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by Lilbabe on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 12:28:40 PM AEST
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that was a very vivid image you created. nice work.
its terrible that you live with the "enemy". i know how that feels.
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Re: We Live Together
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by Packatack on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 03:12:28 PM AEST
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Whoa kickass poem u wrote here.
Reminded me of gradeschool takin on bullies!
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Re: We Live Together
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by shelby on
Saturday, 16th September 2006 @ 03:12:59 PM AEST
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Raw emotions so powerful. You captured this with such honesty.
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