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Trying to write a poem
Contributed by
kasean
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Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 12:58:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Trying to Write a poem...
To get things of your mind,
But the more and more you pick.
You are harder to find.
You think "I Love Him,"
But you can't put words together.
You try and try and try,
And it feels to take forever.
You think just let it go,
And it will be fine.
Once i am finished,
Whats written will be mine!
Still trying and still nothing,
on your paper or in your head.
So you deside to give up,
And write on how your trying instead.
It's not that easy!!!
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kasean
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2006-09-18 00:58:48]
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Re: Trying to write a poem
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by twbanter on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 02:30:36 AM AEST
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Hi Kayti. (Ilike the spelling there)
For me, poetry comes when it comes. I've had to run out of the shower, dripping wet, at times, to document whatever was fresh in my mind.Though the concept never goes away, it's the perfect wording, that wants to go astray...
You sound young, and you are good at this. You will only get better.
Looking forward to seeing you grow.
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Re: Trying to write a poem
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by MarcRob on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 10:31:53 AM AEST
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Hi :-)
I have an feeling or an idea on what to write about, I will then split up it up to the be the negative and postitives of the poem. I use poetry not only to make people feel what i feel, but to make a point as well.
Inspiration comes from anyplace.. wording it is the hard part. Keep it up and you will do ok.
Time for me to go, off into the night, for my dream friends are awaiting, for me to feel alright |
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