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My Fantasy
Contributed by
mali
on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 06:45:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Youve broken my heart
And stolen my tears
Its all my fault
And all I feared
I ruin your days
And stuff up your nights
Embarrass you always
And cause all the fights
Our minds are lost
And your hands are fisted
But Im just me
Warped and twisted
Breaking your courage
Your happiness is gone
Youre a beautiful guy
But I dont belong
You see, youre my world
Where the sun always shines
The grass is always green
And the clouds are always bright
But my worlds a dull place
Full of broken hearts
Dark eyes & blood tears
With the earth falling apart
Thats why Im scared to lose you
Coz youre my worlds paradise
Where we are always smiling
And our futures clear and bright
But when you decide to leave
That will be the day
I kill myself inside
And my world blows away
As I sit here and wipe my tears
I hang my head down low
Knowing Im not worth a thing
And my heart so dull and shallow
I wish I did deserve you
But youre my minds fantasy
Where the clouds are made of diamonds
And the grass is sparkly
I love you more than anything
And Im sorry for treating you bad
You deserve so much more
Than a girl that makes you sad
I suppose youll just be my fantasy
Where it pours diamante rain
The sun turns platinum gold
And you love me the same
Copyright ©
mali
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2006-09-18 06:45:55]
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Re: My Fantasy
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by ever1der on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 01:28:31 PM AEST
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| diamante rain ..I like that. |
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Re: My Fantasy
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by shelby on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 05:50:02 PM AEST
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Written with such grace and flowing style. Feeling it through and through.
Though......
with this much talent I feel your a worthy worthwhile person. It is hard for us at times to see in ourselves what others see in us, the good beautiful soul. Shine, as you do so perfectly in this write. You have great talent.
~Michelle |
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