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Unforgiven
Contributed by
MarcRob
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Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 10:21:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Showing that you care
And saying its for the best
Knowing how to share
And leaving for a rest
Walk the narrow path
Cross the fine line
Do not not turn around
No one is behind
Hold out your hand
And call for help
Call out your name
And look within yourself
Say what you want
Do what you do
Never forgive me
I have no trust for you
Copyright ©
MarcRob
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2006-09-18 10:21:21]
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Re: Unforgiven
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by Light_to_your_Darkness on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 10:55:39 AM AEST
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Hold out your hand
And call for help
Call out your name
And look within yourself.....
That's my favorite part. so very true. This is a good write :) |
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Re: Unforgiven
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by nightwolf on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 11:47:33 AM AEST
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| very truthfull. good write |
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Re: Unforgiven
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by shelby on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 05:26:50 PM AEST
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The last line made it so final, something I can relate to. Nicely done!
~Michelle~ |
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