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No Title
Contributed by
Exodus
on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 01:58:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Lonely traveler Thoughtless dream A search for a meaning To find the God machine
Happy beginnings Sorrowful ends Bliss followed by contempt for you Watch the weather machina sends
Tortured by your motives Sickened in dismay Sick of all the sad things You set out for me all along the way
Goodbye, I'm dangerous Bewildered by your untouched glass Stuck in the future Haunted by the past
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Exodus
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2006-09-18 13:58:21] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: No Title
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 05:14:32 PM AEST (User
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Soulful write, flowing and capturing such detailed emotion. Flawless to say the least.
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Re: No Title
(User Rating: 1 ) by 3660Days on
Monday, 6th April 2009 @ 01:41:03 PM AEST (User
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The first 3 stanza's were alright, the 4th stanza was brilliant. |
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