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metal nettles
Contributed by
twick
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Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 05:47:27 PM in AEST
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metal nettles
mixed in my porridge
a little unhappiness for breakfast
add a glass of acidic orange juice
to chase it down.
Eat it fast,
that way it's not so bad.
metal nettles swimming in your stomach
slowly ripping you apart.
so shiny, so sharp.
it's easy breakage
and I never knew until it was too late.
I suffered so much heartache
always having metal nettles for
breakfast.
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twick
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2006-09-18 17:47:27]
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Re: metal nettles
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by Skillz on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 01:19:33 AM AEST
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| Great poem !!!!!! i could almost feel and taste it !! Amazing that our thoughts can have that isnt it. |
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Re: metal nettles
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by ShaonKra on
Wednesday, 25th February 2009 @ 05:42:26 PM AEST
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Good, I can now imagine metal nettles. I must thank you for it. Poem has a good sound to it and prob was the right idea to keep it short
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