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NA
Contributed by
AllHeWrote
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Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 07:51:21 PM in AEST
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Looking back upon
Stone-cold embers
In a rear-view mirror
Of October skies
Looking back into
Ship-wrecked waters
These memories are
Like music to my eyes
Press your ear
Against my chest and
Listen to the ocean
Either it's your music
Or "The tinsmith forgot
To give me a heart...
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2006-09-18 19:51:21]
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Re: NA
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by StormyNites on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 08:02:33 PM AEST
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| a sad read but good write. |
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Re: NA
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 10:55:55 PM AEST
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... music to my eyes?
Abstract or not, that image doesn't really work. That said, though, on the whole I like this one. The lines move well and interact with each other as they should, and the images are mostly quite luminous.
Sounds like you're off to a good start. Write on, as much as you can. There's nothing to improve writing like doing it all the time.
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