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Only He
Contributed by
Boobee
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Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 10:12:09 PM in AEST
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Only he is worthy of worship and praise
Only he can feel your pain
Only he is truly perfect
Only he can keep you sustained
Only he is everywhere at all times
Only He can hear your cry
Only He can take away all your fears
Only He can do and not try
Only he can really judge
Only He knows your heart
Only He provides answers to your prayers
Only He can prt together what was always apart
Only He can never fail
Only He gives clarity to what we view
Only He can shed light on the darkness in our lives...
This is what only God can do.
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Boobee
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2006-09-18 22:12:09]
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Re: Only He
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by emystar on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 10:17:26 PM AEST
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Very beautifull praise and so very true.
God bless you for posting this.
huggs,
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Re: Only He
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by ShaonKra on
Friday, 27th February 2009 @ 07:54:57 AM AEST
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Good, nice and simple. You may want to use a wider variety of conjuctions/bridges that would give your poem a better flow where some the length of some lines interrupt the rhythm slightly. Keep up the good work
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Re: Only He
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 08:48:57 PM AEST
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If you're going to capitalize "He", it helps to do so in ALL cases. Similarly, "prt together"? You need to proofread this.
The "Only He" repetition works well, but line lengths needs work if you want it to flow well. |
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