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Tears
Contributed by
outsider
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Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I find the tears flow too freely from me
I turn my head as I dont want you to see
The anguish that comes from my tortured soul
No amount of weeping will make me feel whole.
And though I try to keep the tears inside
I find there is no place to hide.
Freely they flow from deep within
My inner pain made fresh again.
My face made wet as if from virgin snow
These tears have no other place to go.
I feel my eyes have let me down
I frown these tears away, I want to come around.
If you see me cry you might think I care
And I couldnt bear you to stop and stare
To see me this way in such pain
Just pretend I'm standing in the rain.
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outsider
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2003-02-14 09:00:00]
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Re: Tears
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 09:13:26 AM AEST
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AAWWW very touching peice, nicely done,
Your Welcome for that great inspiration,It made you write a nice peace! Christina |
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Re: Tears
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 04:30:25 PM AEST
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I love the last line! That's beautiful. The whole thing is beautiful. Awesome write.
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: Tears
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 07:02:28 PM AEST
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| ohhh i love this ..it is soo beautiful!! great write... huggs always nessa |
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Re: Tears
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by Lovingangel4u on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 08:14:57 AM AEST
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| As always well written. But so very sad and alone.... ILUVM |
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Re: Tears
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by Lovingangel4u on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 08:15:53 AM AEST
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| As always well written. But so very sad and alone.... ILUVM |
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Re: Tears
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 02:58:14 PM AEST
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Wow this was amazing. I loved this... You definitely show great talent.
Bobo (Joel) |
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