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With all my pain
Contributed by
Soccerflyer27
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Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 03:58:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My heart burns a flame of cold, blue fire.
Your understanding is all I desire.
So deep, these feelings tend to go,
And it pains my soul, hurts me so.
I can't stand the fact that you're gone.
It seems impossible for me to move on.
This broken heart will never FULLY heal.
Because that love was true, and that love was real.
You tore it in half, and broke me in two.
But with all your hate, I still love you.
That cold, blue fire will become the stain,
That you left there, with all my pain.
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Soccerflyer27
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2006-09-19 15:58:07]
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Re: With all my pain
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by ButchCorpuz on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 11:23:55 PM AEST
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Nice poem! You captured the emotion involoved in a heartbreak so much.
Keep writing!
-Butch Corpuz
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Re: With all my pain
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by GurLG0nEWr0ng on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 02:16:21 AM AEST
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| Pretty cool. Nyce write. |
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Re: With all my pain
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by wildcherry3393 on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 09:43:59 PM AEST
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| thats so good! i almost cryed!!! your really good at portraying emotion! |
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Re: With all my pain
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 10:02:21 PM AEST
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A most sincere writting filled with the impact that comes with a love gone awry. Your coming true most convincingly in the realm of hurt. Nicely done.
myheartsvoice
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