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For you
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 04:27:50 PM in AEST
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When moonlight comes,
And stars shine bright,
When the planets are on show,
I will look above,
For those I love,
For they are there you know,
When the sun shines bright,
In the mornings light,
And you don't want the day to end,
I wil take the time
With these words in rhyme
To thank you my dear friend,
For you have helped,
And listened too,
And been there for me,
Its nice to know,
That people care,
And how good friends can be
Thank you
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Re: For you
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by nightwolf on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 04:53:14 PM AEST
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| i enjoyed this poem. good write |
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Re: For you
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 05:41:46 PM AEST
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| friends are like a needed part of life aaren't they? you write well, my friend. |
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Re: For you
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by StormyNites on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 05:44:30 PM AEST
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| a very beautiful poem |
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Re: For you
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by Oneir8dude on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 09:44:57 PM AEST
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Sue my friend,
I had to say goodbye to my Gradpops this morning...
I have been so filled with grief all day...
with help from you and these lines...
"I will look above,
For those I love,
For they are there you know"
You made me smile...
Thank you so much for your very indeering words...
Your very good friend
Bill |
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Re: For you
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 11:25:57 PM AEST
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Very beautifull write, my friend.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: For you
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 05:26:18 PM AEST
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Wow. Just, wow.
This is the kind of poem that I would definitely
expect to be on one of those wonderfully sweet
and sincere Hallmark To-your-friend type cards.
I adore those, and I adore this too.
Loving the flow in this piece.
Thankies for sharing.
Kaitlyn.
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