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Avengement
Contributed by
Skillz
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Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:06:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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In a dark musty corner of the room
A lone greasy lightbulb dangles
From a frayed dusty string
No longer able to shed any light
There is a stooped shadow of man
His calloused elbows protruding
Through his rancid threadbare sweater
Displaying the grime of a body unwashed.
On the scarred unsteady table in front
Of this stooped solitary man
Lays his cruel weapon of choice
He hesitates,he's unsure of its use.
In crooked spindly fingers he lifts it
Stroking its indifferent cool sleekness
With shaking soiled hands he finds his target
Fearful that his shadowy aim may not be true
With a raspy breath he sighs
A garrish demonic grin upon his face
The poison curses through his veins
He proceeds to pen his toxic words.
Copyright ©
Skillz
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2006-09-21 00:06:07]
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Re: Avengement
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:17:06 AM AEST
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wow i am impress with this write.
well done |
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Re: Avengement
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by Oneir8dude on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:24:06 AM AEST
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I bow to you my queen... Holy moly...
OUCH TO THE OLD MAN IN THE SWEATER....
I LOVE IT
And you like my stuff... Now I know you are pulling my chain....
Bill |
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Re: Avengement
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by twick on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 01:11:58 AM AEST
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| the imagery in this was amazing! It was refreshing and different! I loved it. |
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Re: Avengement
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by shelby on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 11:01:31 AM AEST
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Each word so detailed and then ending sealed it. Pen his toxic words yes indeed in some hands the pen is a weapon, how true. Your very talented and it is my pleasure to read your work. Please keep posting, Ill be reading.
Huggers
Michelle |
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Re: Avengement
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by jerseysue on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:55:43 PM AEST
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| The pen is mightier than any sword, and you gave us a vision of this. Toxic being very strong a word. Well written. Sue x |
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Re: Avengement
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by AnastasiaN on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 03:40:08 PM AEST
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| awesome imagery |
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