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Epic (Mine)
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:50:14 AM in AEST
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This is my right now, somehow
This is the story of me
And
Everything I know of wings
Of quiet thoughts and simple things
Of passions song and whispered need
Of wordless truths and feeling free
Of falling down to learn to soar
Of bravery and being sure
This all-of-everything of more
This is me unlike before
For
This is dancing unrestrained
A freeing of what was once tamed
An epic tale, unparalleled
My every hesitation felled
This absolute vulnerability
This is me as meant to be
My
Desperation
Endless sighs
Hopelessness
Tear filled eyes
Lightning strikes
Thunder rolls
Childlike wonder
Secrets told
Impassioned pleas
Speechlessness
Faithful heart
One true wish
Simple want
Pure desire
Light of day
Night afire
Falling down
To rise above
This is me in love.
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Silent-No-More
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Re: Epic (Mine)
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:55:00 AM AEST
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awww snemmy i can see your in love.
You go girl
awsome write
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Re: Epic (Mine)
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by Skillz on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 12:59:42 AM AEST
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| Loved the poem !! |
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Re: Epic (Mine)
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 10:50:04 AM AEST
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Oh Snem, This was perfect. I so loved how you penned it. The ending.... short stanzas that moved right along with powerful force. I love to read you. Great stuff, as always, my friend.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Epic (Mine)
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by shelby on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 11:17:22 AM AEST
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Ohhhhhhh Snemm, hugs to you! Your heart on the page so perfectly displayed. Thanks for sharing your heart, open and soaring! Your pen sings hun it really does. Talent shines, lighting up everything and everone around you. I wish this feeling for you to never end! Noone deserves it more.
Michelle |
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Re: Epic (Mine)
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:43:50 PM AEST
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Love can be soooo wonderful
thanks for reminding me of that fact
Excellent flow |
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Re: Epic (Mine)
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by jerseysue on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 02:52:22 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful. I wish I felt like that. Its nice to see what love can do. Sue xx |
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Re: Epic (Mine)
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 03:31:18 AM AEST
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This is also you at your best, Snemma. This piece pulsates with life, and skill too. The rhyme and rhythm are very musical and right on key.
Highly enjoyable and uplifting reading, this makes. Bravo!
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Re: Epic (Mine)
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by Spike on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 08:35:59 PM AEST
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Awesome declaration of self, Snem, and to the power of love to bring out our best qualities, and to make everything - even the miniscule, so darn intense.
A small correction - Line 13 is a little long. Maybe substitute 'that' for 'what was' (Ha! I just remembered when you did this to me).
S |
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Re: Epic (Mine)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 04:49:19 AM AEST
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As always, amazingly stunning and superior. The flow is pure perfection.
So, ya' gonna introduce us to this lucky bloke? ;-)
Timberanamo
O_O
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Re: Epic (Mine)
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by Keilantra on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 05:20:49 PM AEST
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very very sweet.
profound sentiments on a page. excellent.
xXx
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Re: Epic (Mine)
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by NDean on
Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 07:42:57 AM AEST
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Flows really well. I really like this poem.
The ending I really didnt expect. Really Cool.
Nathan |
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Re: Epic (Mine)
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 03:49:22 AM AEST
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This has just blown me away, another flawless piece of writing, true poetry can be felt, seen, and experienced, and this is what you have achieved here, it rolled so fast with emotion ritght toward the perfect ending(this is me in love) amazing words...well done!!!
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Re: Epic (Mine)
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 30th September 2013 @ 01:16:24 AM AEST
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| fantastic write! |
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Re: Epic (Mine)
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 1st September 2020 @ 03:58:28 AM AEST
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| Loved it too. |
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