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Coversations To
Contributed by
Uncertain_Oblivion
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Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 03:27:07 PM in AEST
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Me- You're void within.
Myself- So?
Me- You have nothing without.
Myself- I've known nothing else.
Me- It's all a dream inside a dream.
Myself- Really? Then I should be able to sleep twice as hard.
Me- Your thoughts are playing off of my thoughts.
Myself- I have my own thoughts, I don't need yours.
Me- Is there someone else with you.
Myself- Of course...you.
Me- You're a prisoner inside yourself.
Myself- What was my crime?
Me- Birth.
Myself- Then death shall be my Justice.
Me- You're so alone you don't even realize it.
Myself- no I'm not...you're with me.
Insanity gives me someone to talk to.
~Rhiannon
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Re: Coversations To
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by LonelyPoet on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 05:35:49 PM AEST
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| Very good poem !!! |
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Re: Coversations To
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by drtylilsecret on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 06:08:14 PM AEST
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ah the irony. gotta love it. fantastic write.
--talli
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Re: Coversations To
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by deadclown on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 06:32:36 PM AEST
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| Liked how u did this. Brought a smile to my face. Dark humour in parts. Love it |
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Re: Coversations To
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 07:57:36 PM AEST
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Wow sis, this is deep. The last line, simply stinging. Great write.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Coversations To
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by crazy on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 07:40:42 AM AEST
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thats weird i thought i was teh only one who had converstations with myself.
i feel what your saying .the last line.... i absolutly love it because thats true for alot of people especially me. fantastic poem |
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