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JUST CANT BREATH
Contributed by
poewhit
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Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 04:19:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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That was a big,big sneeze.
Went down on my knees.
NO- they were not just fleas.
Air born dust- flying in the breeze.
Look just like fast flying sparrows.
Polluted air is full of such arrows.
Man on the soapbox talks with rust.
DIRTY AIR-This is a bust!!!!
Lungs need to be cleaned soon.
Catch the loon on the next tune.
Cement mixer is going full blast.
Just-JUMP-it was the last.
Three packs a day is your fill.
NO!! I'LL never get ill-that pill.
MAN ON THE SOAPBOX JUST SAID,
""ACID-RAIN will melt pure lead.""
Melt my lungs before I might die.
FUNNY color skin, rain full of dyes.
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poewhit
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2006-09-21 16:19:40]
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Re: JUST CANT BREATH
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by LonelyPoet on
Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 05:34:04 PM AEST
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Re: JUST CANT BREATH
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 09:11:03 PM AEST
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Good subject matter, and you have a good rhythm going on.
Peace, Laura |
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