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better off
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Thursday, 21st September 2006 @ 11:57:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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you expect me to lay here and cry all day
but tears don't fall because i'm better off this way
you want me to yell and scream and hate you
but i'm better off without you..
you think i'll beg you to come back to me
but i'm better off alone and free...
you want to come home and lay by my side
but i'm better off with nothing to hide
you want to see me hurt and scared
but i'm better off then when i cared
now do i want you back in my life
i'd be better off stabbing you with a knife...
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Re: better off
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 01:19:12 AM AEST
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A strong display of emotions, but I do not know about the knife. :)
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Re: better off
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by crazy on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 07:31:35 AM AEST
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| awsome i love it so much anger and hate the last line perfect |
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Re: better off
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 08:45:32 AM AEST
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I can relate... Relationships like this are a pain in the ass.. I mean you get broken hearted but then it is like You were better off without them in your life.... It sucks... This was a great poem...
Take care
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Re: better off
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by Oneir8dude on
Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 07:49:51 PM AEST
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now do i want you back in my life
i'd be better off stabbing you with a knife...
Wow these words made you better off...
Stab him in the heart :)
A lotof anger in your words..
You are indeed better off
Thank you
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Re: better off
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by AnastasiaN on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 03:24:40 PM AEST
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| i'm glad you have found the strength to realize that...many ppl do not until it is too late...speaking of those kinds of ppl............. |
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