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They're Back
Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 12:05:10 AM in AEST
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I know theyre not mine
Though I think of them as such
They nest in the sign
The billboard that thrusts
Up from the ground
And into the air
Sheltered from wind
And the suns heated glare
They take to the sky
All together it seems
To fly in formation
A stunt pilots dream
They twist and they turn
Then they roll and they dive
Together as one
Like they share the same mind
Not nearly as graceful
As eagles or hawks
But their acrobatic antics
Are mesmerizing to watch
I stand and I stare
All the while I dream
How Id love, just one time
To be part of that team
~ Nazmythian ~
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Nazmythian
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Re: They're Back
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by emystar on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 02:36:29 AM AEST
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Nice write, my friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: They're Back
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 04:20:30 PM AEST
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this is odd because it doesn't exactly rhyme but sounds like it does..no..wait, I see it now..it does have perfect rhyme.
wouldn't you like to be a bird..I would. How goes it D.M.
foot holding up and everything? (((scott))) |
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Re: They're Back
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 03:45:06 PM AEST
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Naz,
If we could fly would the flight in itself be enough, or would we need to seek a destination to make it all worthwhile? Or if we can walk is the walking in itself enough, or is the destination more important?
....How free it must feel to fly!
I so enjoy your poems, they seem to trigger my immagination, my friend
PS I hope your recuperation goes well, Nazzy
Will/Terry |
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Re: They're Back
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by needledancing on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 09:47:27 PM AEST
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| Sounds like our Snowbirds....we not only see them fly over..we hear the most magnificent sound. Great poem.... |
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Re: They're Back
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Friday, 19th June 2009 @ 12:08:31 AM AEST
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Here little birdies
Peace |
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