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Why Do I Love You?
Contributed by
brittaney
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Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 07:23:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Why do I love you,
Unsensitive one?
Alone, Left again,
Nauseous, numb.
Stomache twisting,
I drop to the floor.
Thoughts racing,
I'm whole no more.
Feelings shifting,
Inside of my mind.
My heart isn't beating,
But i'm still alive.
Why do I love you,
Unsensitive one?
Alone, Left again,
Nauseous, numb.
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brittaney
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2006-09-23 19:23:40]
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Re: Why Do I Love You?
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by detourchick on
Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 08:06:41 PM AEST
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| ive totally felt like that so many times really feelin this poem |
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Re: Why Do I Love You?
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by catz77 on
Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 09:44:42 PM AEST
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this is a good write
but it would flow better if -of- wasnt there
(3rd stanza 2nd line)
catz =) |
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