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Born again
Contributed by
evolon
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Saturday, 23rd September 2006 @ 08:18:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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All I could do was think of you
I missed you so much
Begging please return, couldnt walk threw life
I wanted to die in such
Needing, wanting for only you
Ready to forgive and let go everything you put me threw
So week to keep us,
I would have stood by and let you do what you do
It took time and some tears but I graduated to faze two
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Im thinking better a little more clear
I wanted for you to hurt
So you could be where..
I once was, lost in the silhouette of love
Remember we said it so much
But when said, it wasnt me you thought of
Slowly I moved on tried looking for a new
It worked for a second but now Im like you
I really like her she really cool
In the back of my mind wanting the B.S. I went threw
Misery loves company
See, she helped with the stress
Ironically she was going threw the same thing
So she had her own mess
Best way to see it
We rebounded each other I guess
Thinking of it now we never formally broke it off
We just communicate a lot less
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So now Im all good my minds refreshed
In my anger I called you some colorful things
But all honest I wish you the best
I will always have love for you
Im there if you need me dont forget
All the pain and the lies I let go
Our time together, no regrets
I will always remember you
If you think of me think of the day before we met
No negative intent
Take care
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evolon
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Re: Born again
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by kaleidoscope on
Friday, 10th November 2006 @ 09:18:23 PM AEST
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| I am not sure what to say about this...I liked it..but i didn't like it. Lets put it this way..i liked it so much BECAUSE i didn't like it..Why you ask? or you may not care but this is just my feelings on the matter and i am here to write feelings and thoughts so here goes...The write was great-everything about it- but it put me back into memories of how i went through all that..(thats why i didn't like it) but you always seem to like writes you can relate to and HA relate is an understatement...tho this may not be about you it certainly took me to a place...good place and bad place...anyways this is bound to be your longest comment and im jabbering now so ill stop. blah... |
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