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Decision
Contributed by
Elisabeth
on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 12:05:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Starlit and glazed-temptation
As inbetween your thighs
Looking through your eyes
Claiming all your highs
Moving in your sighs
Twisted in your lies
Loving your goodbyes
Rotting with the flies
One too many tries
To answer your 'whys'
But everyone dies
Taking one from a dying birth to where death is alive and full
With a promise of LIFE or REGRET
Learn or burn the truth
As without any foes
That bled from your nose
Beauty of a rose
Uncovered without clothes
River of goodness flows
While purity grows
And righteousness glows
Where one with faith goes
The truth the weak chose
And everyone knows
Of LIFE or REGRET
Copyright ©
Elisabeth
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2006-09-24 00:05:10]
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Re: Decision
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th September 2006 @ 10:25:20 PM AEST
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While this may be a little over abundant in same rhyme lines when read, I read this aloud in performance mode to my wife and she commented, Whoa! It was a very complimentary Whoa! Nice work!
wabl
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Re: Decision
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 04:49:07 PM AEST
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Wow, so many twists and turns... much like the roller coaster of life. Very nicely done. :-)
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