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lacking
Contributed by
caddishcut
on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 01:32:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Casted aside
No need to hide
For I have died
In your mind
Not so kind
More inclined
To deny
My existence
Copyright ©
caddishcut
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2006-09-25 01:32:53]
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Re: lacking
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 07:29:29 PM AEST
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i have always wondered how people can so much in so little words....this one was fantastic.
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Re: lacking
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by Lilbabe on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 09:20:55 PM AEST
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that was short and right down to the point. you just explained in a few simple words what most people take stanzas to say. pretty good!
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Re: lacking
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 12:33:45 PM AEST
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Simply brillant... This was amazing...
Take care
christina |
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