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A Parrot
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 09:17:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There was once a parrot
- a Cockatoo I believe
that escaped from its cage
and flew around the house
it found some chips
- that couldnt be good for it
and a radio
- it turned on
the long-live bird listened
- learnt a language
and roamed the house
a chimney blocked
every window locked
each door bolted
trapped, but free from the cage
a wealth of words to share
but no-one came home
a squatter
never a squawker
without an audience
no-one to share thoughts
and crystal clear windows
- silhouette birds on sunset
roaming the world over
while this parrot
ate his chips
talked to his image
- a bathroom mirror
trapped, but free from the cage
a wealth of words to share
getting fat
and passing away prematurely
before anyone came home.
25/9/06
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Re: A Parrot
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 05:29:49 PM AEST
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Woah.. I'm not sure what to make of this.
We have 3 cockatoos of our own, as well as
a couple of cockatiels too.
You've described the way they act so well, it's almost like watching the bird on screen.
Thought-provoking though, how the birdie dies before anyone comes home to witness its half-freedom.
Thanks for sharing this.
*hugglies*
Kat.
[going to check on her birds now ;p]
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Re: A Parrot
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by crazyn on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 06:08:52 PM AEST
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| very well described poem, it sounded very real. it seems like the parrot has been personified into human like behaviour. well done. |
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Re: A Parrot
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by Alison on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 01:29:35 PM AEST
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i see that "parrot" many times....
good write |
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