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its your doing.
Contributed by
nightwolf
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Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 10:27:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
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the abuse has left me dead at mind
and as i wach my time fly by
theres nothing i'd like more today
than to watch you slowly die
i think about your every lie
and how stupid each one me feel
with a knife i sit at the edge of my bed
as my visions become real
i stand up and make my way down the hall
and stop outside your door
the door flyes open and i grab you
and toss you to the floor
standing over you and looking down
im smiling and im cooing
"dont look so surprised
its all your doing"
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2006-09-25 10:27:10]
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Re: its your doing.
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 08:27:54 PM AEST
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why so much anger
i love it
you did great on this write |
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Re: its your doing.
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by thumper on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 11:58:00 PM AEST
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"Shivers" Ok, now I sleep with my bedroom door locked! J/K. This was a smooth read and good content. Enjoyed very much. Peace to you.
Thumper ;o) |
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Re: its your doing.
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by CaptainSpaldo05 on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 08:28:43 PM AEST
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Trust me...Theres been times where in a relationship I too question this..
But I assume your as level headed as I am, as most are, and take your frustrations out in the poem.
Great write. |
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