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Is it wrong??????
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 12:58:39 PM in AEST
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would it be wrong if i kissed you
when my heart breaks from the pain
would it be wrong to want you
to touch me in all the right places
is it wrong ot need company from a man
when my world crashes down ust to be lost in a moment of lust
and watch the past rot and turn to dust'
was it wrong to feel you touch me in the deepest places
knowing that she was my friend
and you were hers that she maniuliplated you and used you
now in the dust of what might have been
i find my self in the embrace of your mouth on me
your heat on me...
and i'm lost in my lust and need for passion.. that i let go
and fall apart on you..
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2006-09-25 12:58:39]
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Re: Is it wrong??????
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by yangdantien on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 11:07:40 AM AEST
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Your words evoke many feelings... a bittersweet confession and transgression. You expose your emotions and this connects deeply.
I say 'when you cant be with the one you love, Love the one your with...'basic 60's wisdom to 'take these broken wings and learn to fly... even in the dead of night...
Peace
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