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You Shall Not Pass
Contributed by
Elisabeth
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Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 01:06:45 AM in AEST
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Classic obscenities
Burning your remedies
Purity
Pass a beer
It's okay for now
That you can fornicate with time
Every sin that you box away
Strike a match
Burn some more
Don't think
Sing
Love anthem
"We the people, live for what is not"
Eye for a heart
Tooth for a soul...
Pay
Copyright ©
Elisabeth
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2006-09-26 01:06:45]
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Re: You Shall Not Pass
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 02:54:30 AM AEST
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Oh there is nothing like a women scorned. I’ll be standing clear of you. “Strike a match, burn some more” Hell’s fire has no mercy I see. “Smile” I may have interpreted this poem the wrong way. If so forgive me.
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Re: You Shall Not Pass
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 11:13:04 AM AEST
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Time tested wisdom in a thought-provoking shortie! Too high a price t' pay! Excellent, Elisabeth!
wabl
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Re: You Shall Not Pass
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 08:03:37 PM AEST
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..leaves much to the imagination~
good work.
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Re: You Shall Not Pass
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 09:02:30 AM AEST
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| excellent, astract, but speaks loud and clear! all of those things, indeed shall not pass.. |
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Re: You Shall Not Pass
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 08:26:17 PM AEST
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This is one of those poems that seems a few interpretations could be read into it or gotten out of it. I especially like those first two lines. Seems a lot of good can be angered, perhaps even injured from the age old bad.
Very interesting write.
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Re: You Shall Not Pass
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Wednesday, 25th August 2010 @ 08:39:57 PM AEST
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| Every time i put 'fornicate' in a poem they remove it....LOL |
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