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Makuahine
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 10:43:52 PM in AEST
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You were the one that was supposed to...
Make me a better man through and through...
The one to teach me right and wrong...
Teach me the melody in a song...
How to treat a woman and show my love...
How to believe in the power above...
You were suppose to treat me with love and dignity...
Take my pain away until my plate was empty...
How to be a friend with heart of plenty...
How to be a mentor to all I see...
The thing you were supposed to do is love me well...
And pick me up when in a deep hole I fell...
You were suppose to provide for me...
And with your love keep me carefree...
You were suppose to do all of these things...
And a good person these things would bring...
I can finally tell you, because I am much older now...
That what you did, is make it easy to say how...
You did a great Job! Thank You Mom...
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Re: Makuahine
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 12:15:40 AM AEST
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What a wonderful tribute to your Mother, Bill. Very nice write. Smile-inducer for sure.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Makuahine
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by emystar on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 01:05:25 AM AEST
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This is beautifull and any mom would luv to get this.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Makuahine
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 07:07:51 PM AEST
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Congrats to you dearest Bill~ on penning a beautiful tribute to a most special and deserving soul. Mother's are extraordinary people. I'm so lucky I still have mine around. She's a real gem. Thanks for the smiles dearest Bill and for the awesome post too.
hugs n prayers,
Sue M |
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Re: Makuahine
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by shelby on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 08:14:13 AM AEST
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Made me smile, yes where would we be without our mothers? Your a sweety indeed!
I enjoy each one of your poems .
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Makuahine
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th October 2010 @ 06:57:42 PM AEST
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| That was a great poem. :) Real Mother's are always there for us. |
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