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Ugly Color Building
Contributed by
JockPhillips
on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 03:35:47 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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That building there is such an ugly color
Jock Phillips will take ocean water all sea green
Or it looks green anyway because of various factors
Or field grass that's a color and is bright and nice and such
Poet faces might call it luscious or some such thing
Jock Phillips wouldn't put it on a building though
At least not all haphazard and ugly like that
What a stupid building there
Jock Phillips will be rolling down a mountain hill side plunging into nice ocean water
Enjoying colors instead of being stupid with them like buildings and people are sometimes
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2006-09-29 15:35:47]
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Re: Ugly Color Building
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by annoiosa on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 03:40:35 PM AEST
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| I like the end :) |
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Re: Ugly Color Building
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 08:17:30 PM AEST
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Jock Phillips? Interesting that you have your name in your poem three different times. I wonder why you felt the need to do that. Interesting.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Ugly Color Building
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 03:34:26 PM AEST
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| we hve a little building down from us..they uused the windows as eyes and put a little cat-like black nose on it and a big cute smile..I love driving by that house..your poem reminded me..but there are some ugly houses and people. nice write. |
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