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Life Long Tunage
Contributed by
oneir8dude
on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 10:40:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Today I took a small break form the grind
For an electrician was in a space that was mine
I went outside to my service van
Threw my tools, I was angry. Man!!!
I said nothing when I left
My whole day ruined, a kind of DAY THEFT
My mind wasnt moving, Stuck on one thing
So I turned on the radio and began to sing
Its been a long time since Ive Rock N Rolled
Zeppelin was playing My troubles did fold
The beat grabbed me and took me away
To a place I usually always stay
But, I am only human, a man that can fall
If I cant hear the music, I feel two feet tall
As I felt the calm come and anger lack
On the radio came Savin Me Nickelback
Say it if its worth savin me, hurry Im falling"
The words grabbed me and the anger again was calling
When I felt the ugliness return
I felt selfish, like this anger I earned
I changed the station and what was on
But Aerosmiths ballad Dream On
Dream on, Dream on, Dream until your dreams come true
As I heard these words the meaning of life rang through
I was being unruly and needed to be
The way I was raised, this was not me
The guy didnt ruin my day on purpose
My dismay for this day was worthless
I went back into the site
He was gone and all was right
I came back with a smile on my face
And back to it I began to race
Lyrics soothe and music is the root of life
It can make you smile or cut like a knife
When ever youre down turn on the radio
Pop in a CD or tape, you can even watch a video
The point I am trying to make
There is meaning in song that you can take
It will either help or make you feel worse
It can make you smile or make you curse
The world would be bland if not for a tune
It brings great thought and a shine to the moon
So what I say to you. When you are feeling mad or blue
Throw on a song to help you through
Sing it loud and sing it true.
It can only help you
Be-Bop-A-Lula Dont Mean Maybe...
Copyright ©
oneir8dude
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2006-09-29 22:40:33]
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Re: Life Long Tunage
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by emystar on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 02:28:53 AM AEST
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Well I luv the beat.
This is supercalfradiualisticepalladoshus!
Great work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Life Long Tunage
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by OzChick on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 06:01:53 AM AEST
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I love the photo at the top, what an awsome outdoor theater.
I like the poem too, life should have a soundtrack. Nice write.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: Life Long Tunage
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by LonelyPoet on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 12:40:56 PM AEST
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| Ilike the content of this poem however I feel the author is too concerned with rhyming and it somewhat takes away from it. He could also perhaps spend some time with spell checking as misspelled words tend to take away fom the flow of the work. |
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Re: Life Long Tunage
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 08:38:23 PM AEST
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Red Rocks, man?? I'd love to see a show there. I dug your write. I know exactly what you mean about the music. My life is sure different, and that happened because of music. Sort of saved me in away. (Born again Deadhead) Hee Hee
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Life Long Tunage
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 05:30:48 PM AEST
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| Ya know..negative comments are ok if they aren't mean spirited and really serve the purpose that is intended..to improve one's ability to write. The poem was great and the photo looks like where I live in the Antelope Valley.. is it? |
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Re: Life Long Tunage
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 07:39:20 PM AEST
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Bill~
it's such a delight to visit your pages my dear friend. This wonderful write of yours had me bopping along to its tune. What would it be like if we had no music to rock n roll to? Hell I don't want to even think that way, lol.
Here's to good times and rock n roll~
Well done Bill and thanks so much for posting this.
*rock n roll hugs & smiles*
Sue M |
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