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Silver and Gold
Contributed by
undead_poet14
on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 11:48:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The golden ribbons from the sun shine down
Songbirds' voices break the silent morning
Silver dewdrops hang on the small green leaves
The most valuable riches of the world
Are unexpectedly, all around us
Even though they may not be jewels or coins
A golden sun and silver lights gleaming
What more do we need to get by?
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Re: Silver and Gold
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bizzy on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 04:31:50 PM AEST
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| Dear undead, No wonder your teacher liked this! You've cut out the excess of wordiness and put a great thought in a 'nutshell'! Bizzy |
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