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Too afraid to pretend that I care
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
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Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
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Haunted eyes weep and broken wounds cry
Desolation feels like a deadly sin
Alone in the dark of her mind and her soul
Never knowing why time suddenly grew so old
Shes got no strength left to ignore everything
Asking for more than shell ever give
Answers to questions that were never told
Needing to make it through the rain
Needing to make it back again
Her eyes are burning but her heart turned cold
A forgotten disguise weighs around her eyes
Chains round her ankles bind her to her lies
Listening to the wind with nothing left to show
Shes learnt more than youll ever know
Hush baby, stop screaming,
Shell never kiss you goodbye
Hush baby, stop screaming,
Shell never kiss you goodbye
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Re: Too afraid to pretend that I care
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 01:07:16 AM AEST
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I was going to pick out a line or two that was really good then i realized they were all good. Wow... this was simply amazing. Words can't descrbe how much I love this. i hope this just came to you and you are not actually experiencing it. Hang in there. Remember I am always here.
Your friend,
Joel |
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Re: Too afraid to pretend that I care
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by Mario on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 02:41:18 AM AEST
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This poem really touched me because i've been threw this where some around you go's from good to cold and everything turns to *****.
IT HURTS alot but dont ever give up, you have to have faith & hope.pray |
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Re: Too afraid to pretend that I care
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by roisin on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 09:54:03 AM AEST
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i, too, like joel wanted to pick out certain lines, and i agree with joel they are all so good...which to choose???..some, very thought provoking...another excellent write...
ta
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Re: Too afraid to pretend that I care
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by venkat on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 06:01:24 AM AEST
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| Very cute and spell binding.. venkat |
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Re: Too afraid to pretend that I care
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 05:39:34 PM AEST
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Deep and thought provoking...
Jenni |
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Re: Too afraid to pretend that I care
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 12:52:25 PM AEST
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| a captivating write. thanx for sharing. |
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Re: Too afraid to pretend that I care
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by fallensilence on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 03:17:37 PM AEST
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| i agree with everything thats already been said about this. great job. -david |
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Re: Too afraid to pretend that I care
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by LadyDama on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 05:54:41 PM AEST
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| absolutely beautifully sad... i can see again into this poem... as venkat said--spellbinding... blessings... |
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