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Within The Silence
Contributed by
Chamaron
on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 09:44:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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The feeling of incompleteness is sent.
I reached for your hands and I missed again.
I looked into your eyes just as you turned away,
Missed you by a second in the fray.
Words to tell you danced upon my lips,
Just as you pull away, the moment slips
In between our fingers, ever so lost.
Yet another day, the hearts greater cost.
Well never see those moments of almost
Until we look back through each other's eyes.
And discover the sweetness
That within those silences lied.
Alas, completeness is what we find.
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2006-10-01 21:44:16]
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Re: Within The Silence
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 10:07:37 PM AEST
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Ooooo this would be so difficult. I'm so...I'd have to blab out my feelings...and if ya don't act now....you may never have the chance and then what??? But that's just me. I wish you well, if this is about you. Good thought provoking write.
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Re: Within The Silence
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 10:13:19 PM AEST
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Very beautifull writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Within The Silence
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 11:32:41 PM AEST
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lots of emotion and feelings here but you know what they say you only live once
and you control the ride so make it a great one and follow your heart |
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Re: Within The Silence
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by Winterland on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 09:25:49 AM AEST
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It seems to me that mixed in with those missed moments are feelings of regret. I thought you did a very good job of capturing the subtle aspects of your topic as well. Very well done!
Jennifer |
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Re: Within The Silence
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 09:59:50 PM AEST
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Well Chamaron, as a first-time reader of your poetry, I can only say.....wow ! I've longed to read a write that says what my heart is whispering, and your write did it all so well. I feel as though some kind of weight has been lifted off my shoulders, because I can finally put into words the beatings of my heart. You write beautifully, continue to do so, and if you ever write other poems under this category, let me know by pm, so I'll be sure not to miss one.
Great job!
PumpkinPie |
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Re: Within The Silence
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 3rd September 2020 @ 03:11:04 PM AEST
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| Very lovely indeed. |
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