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Cell
Contributed by
Amicus
on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 06:49:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Cramped in this cell
Nothing but a livin' hell
Learned the hard way rat's bite
Now I'm learning to fight
This place is my fifth hell
Learned to fight pretty damn well
Was it worth it in the end
Now left alone to fend
~off the world~
Drugs an' booze
'fraid of everything I'd lose
Shot of death in my arm
Silently hanging in the barn
Coke heads no feds
No gain w/out pain
This place is my fifth hell
Learned to fight pretty damn well
Was it worth it in the end
Now left alone to fend
~off the world~
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Amicus
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2006-10-02 06:49:54]
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Re: Cell
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by Nothingness on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 08:38:02 AM AEST
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| This is really good and yes it is all to real, and the sad thing is when people turn to drugs and alcohol they dont realize but chances are they are making someone elses life hell to, and they dont see it becuase all they pay attention to is there own pain, but yeah just my opinion i feel strong on the topic of drugs and alcohol if you didnt already guess ^^ so yeah well done |
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Re: Cell
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 02:44:11 PM AEST
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| I also think that it's quite good, though if beeing picky I'd have to say that there's a problem with rythm |
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