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Contributed by
Exodus
on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 08:45:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There's the mountain
Take it easy and take a climb
With the skyline burning
Burning deep inside
I've got a memory full of answers
I have time to waste
I want to whisper
You've got love and I forgot the taste
A little of this
A little of that
Sitting on the edge
Of a dream I can never catch
I am bitter
Bittersweet
I seclude myself
Inside melancholy
Take me down to the river
Take me down the one way street
Take me inside of everything
Sit in the chair and wait on my dreams
I want to change
I want to find
Every single answer
All the pretty questions inside my secluded mind
Copyright ©
Exodus
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2006-10-02 08:45:38]
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Re: Answers
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by Kellros on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 09:51:53 AM AEST
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| I liked this, very nice use of words :P |
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Re: Answers
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 10:09:42 AM AEST
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I so enjoyed the read. Thank you. I really loved what you had to say in the first stanza....the last couple lines, were great. I hope you find what you need.
Much peace, Laura
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Re: Answers
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by ever1der on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 11:03:59 AM AEST
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I really liked this line and wished it were mine :0
Sitting on the edge
Of a dream I can never catch
That''s so .. poetic. nice write. |
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Re: Answers
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by JockPhillips on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 12:21:49 PM AEST
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| Strong start for. Good content and mountain theme. Keep up the strong work. |
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