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Silenced Screams
Contributed by
JoeyTrib1550
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Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 01:16:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A look from you is as blinding as the sun,
As stunning as your eyes I lose myself in.
A look from you is as pure as the clear blue sky,
As isolating and binding as the ties Im in,
When Im with you
Every minute Im not around you,
I feel like I left something behind.
Every time Im not looking at you,
I feel like I am blind.
A smile from you is as electrifying as the moon,
As beautiful as the moonlight that shimmers off your skin.
A smile from you is as calming as the stars in the sky,
As cruelly wonderful as the world Im in,
When Im with you
For you are the star in my life
An angel in the sky
What do I have to sacrifice?
For you, I would die
Ive tried, but I cant fly
No use, just hurting me more
Youre my angel in the sky
Here I am, tied to the floor
You leave me here, standing in the rain
You leave me here, staring at the sky
You leave me here, in darkness and pain
You leave me here, all alone, to die
Im soaked in blood of shattered dreams
Im drenched in tears of silenced screams
Looking at the stars in the sky.
Theyre like scars, making me cry
For you are the star in my life
You fell from the sky
What do I have to sacrifice?
For you, I die
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JoeyTrib1550
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2006-10-02 13:16:37]
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Re: Silenced Screams
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by annoiosa on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 02:14:26 PM AEST
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| That's really good...I'm not as "intellectual" as others that post here, so I don't exactly know what to say other than that...but it was REALLY good! |
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Re: Silenced Screams
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 03:52:49 PM AEST
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i love this poem!
it's amazing.
is this true or made up?
this are overwhelmingly powerful lyrics, there's so much pain drenched into this.
good job, and keep up the good work! |
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Re: Silenced Screams
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 07:59:29 PM AEST
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Marc~
My friend you have alot of talent. Keep writing for with each new write you will find that you will improve. This write of yours was amazing, yet filled with such sadness. You bring the reader into your world and you make them feel your pain, sadness and loss. I wish your heart healing my friend~
An excellent post. I hope to see more from u dearest Marc~
love, hugs n prayers,
Sue M |
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Re: Silenced Screams
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by babylugz on
Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 02:09:44 AM AEST
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| Oh my god I love it. This is by far one of the best poems I have read on this site. I could actually feel the love and pain in your words. Awesome. |
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Re: Silenced Screams
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by dinolove on
Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 03:06:28 PM AEST
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| this is good. i know what it feels like to want someone you can never have. hang in there. |
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Re: Silenced Screams
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by The_Unknown on
Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 04:37:18 AM AEST
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heey marc!!
luv all ur poems!!
I agree with all of the comments before me, and I have some words of my own: AWESOMELY WONDERFUL WRITE!! I LUV IT!
u have a wonderful talent. great work, keep it up!!
luvs ya!
.~*Jess*~. |
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Re: Silenced Screams
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 12:47:10 PM AEST
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Hi Marc. This poem was amazingly sad and beautiful.. I think that you have a lot of talent and I like reading your poems... I can't pick my favorite stanza or line because I love all of them... And I can relate a little to this... Great poem..
Take care
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