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Days For Dreams
Contributed by
romance_pyro
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Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 07:23:17 PM in AEST
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The Sky, Wide And Blue
Just like my heart
Vast and Empty
Clouds, They Take space in the Sky
And Fill The empty Voids
Just like dreams
The Sun, Joy And Happiness
Bright and fells us with warmth
Like the happy times in our lives
The Rain, Tears Falling From angels
Perfect drops fall down
To wash away all that is bad
The Wind, Carries all
It Moves us around to experience life
And Helps Us Move on after the Rain
When all is lost
And The Sun disappears
All turns dark
The Clouds come
And Sadness sets in
Then Tears Fall
The rain beats slowly at first
Then lingers and sorrow follows
Then A breeze comes by
As The clouds and rain blow away
The sun begins to shine again
And Times seem better
Now you stand and look around
Things are different, The bad is gone
Now Nothing remains
Were Did it all go?
No Matter How Good Things Are
There is always bad.
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romance_pyro
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Re: Days For Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 07:54:26 PM AEST
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I like this poem it is well thought out
just keep on writing and i will be reading more |
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Re: Days For Dreams
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by ever1der on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 10:07:09 PM AEST
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| interesting poem...not very hopeful; but well written. |
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Re: Days For Dreams
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by MarcRob on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 09:45:01 AM AEST
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| Empty hearts don't cry good write |
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Re: Days For Dreams
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by crazy on
Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 06:31:02 PM AEST
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very earthy.nice and balenced yet not at all.
good meaning inside of it.nice write:} |
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Re: Days For Dreams
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 12:34:32 PM AEST
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Nice piece...
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