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Shall We Dance?
Contributed by
The_Unknown
on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 12:03:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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gaze into the eyes of death
stare into the black abyss
when you are finally called upon
gracefully dance with him
A nice young fellow
bringing you back and fourth
whirling you around
off in the distance
appears a flickering light?
its midnight now
yet it seems it has all along
fall in an endless pit?
search for
that little
gasp of light?
dive into an empty meaningless?
move onto a greater life?
dancing apart now
you're on your own now
stearing your way into an empty
black
abyss
anything can be true
everything could be false
death has made its mark
and now
you're on your own
Copyright ©
The_Unknown
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2006-10-03 00:03:59]
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Re: Shall We Dance?
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 02:25:15 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Shall We Dance?
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 04:37:37 AM AEST
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I love the picture this poem paints in my mind
You can really feel the atmosphere
I love it!
with much love and regret, for they can't be seperated,
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Re: Shall We Dance?
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by alasdaircairns on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 07:20:44 AM AEST
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| Ah it's very sad but perfectly pretty too. Great poem and top poetic style. ACE! |
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