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unknown
Contributed by
mindless-wish
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Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 09:15:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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beneath the ground of love and hate
nothing to lose , never be late
unless i cry must you awake
and then maybe ill reach my fate
ive ran ive hid but now its time
for me and only to say goodbye
cause thats when i can rest alone
until i reach a world unknown
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Re: unknown
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 09:17:29 PM AEST
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deep dark scary boo!!!
nice word flow and deep meaning
keep on writing and i will be reading |
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Re: unknown
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 12:23:50 AM AEST
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| good rhyme..sad though |
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