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I Am
Contributed by
Bizzy
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Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I am a girl..... in a woman's body.
I am an innocent child... with grandchildren.
I am a maiden,.... married many years.
I am a babe in Christ in search of soul's to win.
Who is this motherly woman...
That cooks in the kitchen here?
Who primps her hair and shines...
For the old man of the house?
Who is the grandma who sings to the baby..
In yonder rocking chair?
Who is that on her knees in prayer?
Does she really care?
I am that girl, planning this and that.
And I am that plump little lady,
slowly growing wrinkled and old.
I'm that withered, silver-haired saint,...
Yet, I'm still the girl waiting
For the days of life to unfold.
Copyright ©
Bizzy
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2003-02-15 04:30:00]
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Re: I Am
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by karoody on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 04:43:54 AM AEST
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| It is always great to see the lucky few who hold on to their youth....excellent write |
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Re: I Am
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 08:30:59 AM AEST
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| and you'll always be as young as you feel, thanks for this write, beautifully done, welcome, |
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Re: I Am
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by Rose on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 10:44:27 AM AEST
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A very soul thoughtful write. You do know what it is you have and want and still do in your life, as full as it is, you always seem to know how to percieve in His Grace care. :) That your faith in Him allows you to have this wonderful life. You will always be young at heart.
wonderful write
Amber Rose :) |
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Re: I Am
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by Bizzy on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 06:31:09 PM AEST
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| Karoody, I appreciate your comment and read of I Am. Thank you. I promise to read some of your poetry very soon. Bizzy |
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Re: I Am
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by Bizzy on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 06:34:17 PM AEST
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Thanks, Valerie, for reading and commenting on I Am. Your encouragement is appreciated.
Your friend, Bizzy |
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Re: I Am
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by Bizzy on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 06:39:29 PM AEST
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| Dear Amber Rose, Thank you for taking time to read and comment so encouragingly on my poem, I Am. I don't think I've read any of yours yet. I'm fairly new to poetry.com. I will watch for you and return your favor, dear lady. Bizzy |
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Re: I Am
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by CowgirlKid on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 08:19:17 AM AEST
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| Aaaaw.... I love your writing! Its beautiful! This once again is an excellent poem! (if a youthful, eighteen year old's opinion counts!) |
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Re: I Am
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by Bizzy on
Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 05:39:23 PM AEST
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| Thanks, dear Cowgirlkid! |
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Re: I Am
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 08:52:40 AM AEST
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| great poem, i really liked it |
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Re: I Am
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by Bizzy on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 09:41:37 AM AEST
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| Hello, giggles! Thank you for commenting. I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem. Bizzy |
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